An opinion essay

My topic is the "violence in TV/Computergames

Hello my name is Anthony and today I want to talk about a topic that has todo with the efeects of  violence on tv or in videogames, for me it is an intersting topic because I have always heard that, people changer depending on the influences that they receive from others but I, i think  that it has nothing to do whit it because each one is responsible  for what he does and what he should not do .

I'ts true, something has to do with what we see on TV and with the games with play .

People are influenced because they want to, no one forced them to do anything, but in live it is easier to blame others than to know how to admite the mistake we have made .

for this reason all people belive that people change because of the influences of society, but that's not my friends, case each human being chooses  what they want, not because someone tells them .    

COMPOSITION IN ENGLISH

HELLO MY NAME IS ANTHONY, I'M 18 YEARS OLD, ILIVE IN BADALONA. MY FAMILY IS BIG, WE LIVE 6 PERSONS IN A FLAT, I DO NOT WORK BUT I STUDY.

I'M 1,86 TALL, I HAVE SHORT HAIR AND BROWN EYES, I'M A CHEERFUL AND FUN PERSON, I LIKE TO GET ALONG WITH PEOPLE BUT I ALSO HAVE MY TEMPER RATHER SULKY

I LIKE VIDEO GAMES, WACHING TV, EATING, GOING FOR WALKS, ETC. I LIKE TO DO THNGS WELL AND HELP OTHERS AS MUCH AS I CAN I DO NOT HAVE PROBLEMS WITH ANYONE I JUST PREFER NOT TO HAVE PROBLEMNS

MEMORIES ON THE BEACH

HELLO MY NAME IS ANTHONY AND MY PHOTO OF WHEN I WAS WALKING ON THE BEACH . I WAS STRUCK BY THE CLOUDS, THEY HAD REMINDED ME OF MY COUNTRY ECUADOR. I LIKE THE BEACH A LOT, AND GOING FOR WALKS RELAXES ME A LOT WHEN I'M A BIT NERVOUS, I RELAX FOR A WHILE ON THE BEACH, LATELY I HAVE TAKEN WALKS OFTEN ON THE BEACH BECAUSE OF THE PRESSURE OF THE BATXILLERAT, BECAUSE I STILL DO NOT ADAPT TO THE WAY OF STUDYING JAJAJAJAJA 

I LIKE THIS PICTURE BECAUSE IT MAKES ME FEEL GOOD IT REFLECTS WHAT I LIKE ABOUT THE LANDSCAPE, I HAVE ALWAYS LIKED THE BEACH , THE WAY IT MAKES ME FEEL, THAT NO MATTER HOW SMART WE ARE WE CAN NEVER FACE THE BLUE GIANT