Compasition Mistakes (Spanglish)

...because of this, started the depression.
.....where appears all her family.
....and this year will be released two more movies.

Writing Mistakes (Beware of Spanglish!!!)

My house is bigger than Mr Lucas'.
My house is bigger than Mr Lucas's.  (careful with pronuntiation)

He wanted that she cook, clean. (Spanglish)

Adrian loves much his mother. (Spanglish)

deceptionated (Spanglish)

Nigel started a relationship with Pandora anyways. (Spanglish)

They were the last two persons in the neighbour to realise... (Vocab. mistake)

Adrian said his mother that his father was going out with Doreen Slater.  (Gramma mistake)

Corrections:
He wanted her to cook, clean. 
Adrian loves his mother very much. 
Nigel started a relationship with Pandora anyway.
They were the last two persons in the neighbourhood to realise....
Adrian said to his mother....... Adrian told his mother.....